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sweetie2.jpg by Karzahnii sweetie2.jpg by Karzahnii
I didn’t intend on making this story a tear-jerker, but I like to think my writing is organic, and emotions coming from the characters are au naturale (that’s french).
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Critique by Moongoggie Aug 19, 2013, 3:51:53 PM
Wow, This is absolutely stunning, The colors in this piece are so vivid, and the shading is just breathtaking! The anatomy is amazing, especially Sweetie Belle's. I really like how all the unicorn or alicorn ponies always have their horns, no matter what! I love how you drew Twilight, in a pose which is almost identical to show style, It's ridiculous how close it is, I hope no one accuses you of tracing!


The storyline is however, quite heartbreaking, and every time I revisit this page, many tears are shed. This lesson should be taught to all fans of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic everywhere!
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Gaming239 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
xD
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:icontryinq:
tryinq Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist
lms if u cri errytiem
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:iconlordserperior:
Lordserperior Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight Sparkle: Horse Edition
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:icondj-rock-solid:
Dj-Rock-Solid Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
273646362/10 onions
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:iconjosegoncalo:
josegoncalo Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amaze.
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Sombraluz-Images Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
:rofl:
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:iconmiss-mattie-shimmer:
Miss-Mattie-Shimmer Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAASSSSSS
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Dogan2882 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
somepony make my tears stop
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Shabooshka Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
-slaps- THERE, YOUR TEARS HAVE STOP.
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avirextin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
5/5

From the shards of classical art's past, a new glass is made and filled with the theme of this brilliant artist. This piece is the living embodiment of what it means to truly struggle. The artist unintentionally creates a conflicting series of emotions inside the viewer with this work.

The pure feeling of distress created when we see the first young horse who appears to be crying battles with the feeling of superiority over the same horse due to her misshapen body and bad spelling.  We do not know if we want to sympathize with the horse, or pity it.

The lavender horse beside it is the true picture of beauty, with her perfect anatomy, her elegant wing (note that it is folded, showing her modesty) and her flowing ianthine hair. Despite this beauty, however, the horse is much smaller than the younger horse. This shows the exact caricature that is struggle in life.

Our emotions only begin to stir more when we see the lower panel of this sequential artwork; it features a close up of the young pony from before. She now has no tears and a unicorn horn, also leaning a bit farther forward. This only goes to show that this final panel illustrates what it feels to overcome struggle. The horn represents the middle finger, telling all other oncoming problems to 'f**k off,' so to speak.  The lack of tears shows strength and pride. The leaning forward shows that the horse is ready to face anything now, headstrong.

Perfection to the last detail. From the conflicting feelings of sadness seen in the first panel to the overwhelming sense of pride in the last, this puts all other modern works to shame. This is the piece of art showing we are on the precipice of a new age, and this is only the beginning.
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Karzahnii Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you..............thank you
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:iconavirextin:
avirextin Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No. Thank you.
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Rainfull Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
poor sweetie belle Sweetie Belle Emote Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Belle 
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:iconcolmillos:
Colmillos Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweetie, close your mouth! You're gonna catch flies.
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:iconwaxbottle:
WaxBottle Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Professional General Artist
why are there only two of these beauteous things?
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Kittycatze Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
OmG, dIs IS sO aWesOMe. i AM liKe crYinG.
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GURGLEGUY12345 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
I look at the sweet art style of everything else you make, and it make stuff like this particularly jarring... YOU'RE A GENIE-US.
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spark450z Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wOW tHis iS aMAzinG mAn
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:iconflarities:
Flarities Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this
wOW just
beautiful omfg i love u
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Kiriqueeri Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
hoLY SHIT
BEAUTIFUL
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MeriamFunLand1999 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
This makes me cry everytime. Also, is the fact that Twilight is just a pegasus a metaphor for her desire to fly away from all this madness?
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Nyctomancer Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
LIEK IF U CRAI EVYTIEM.
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PeridotApple Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
LIEKD
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Victoria-Summerheart Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013   General Artist
licked
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RyuClockwork Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
I really connect with this piece. It has a lot to say about life and stuff

10/10 would recommend to art enthusiasts of all ages c:
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sapphire475gs Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
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It's obvious I've been on the internet a little bit too long. And I'm thinking my seltzer water must've had something strange in it... the art, the dialogue, THE CRITIQUES... everything appears to be insanity and lies at the moment. Good night, everypony!
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FazedAudio Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Embrace the insanity. Join us! We have baked goods!
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nothing111111 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's what's called a JOKE.
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Gigidog Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
uncanny valley 
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munchimon Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
I ruly laik er maine!1
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arist-o-cat Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the feeeeeeeeelllssss...
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:iconjkcafe:
jkcafe Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is so amazing.
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g-master-artist Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dafuq did i just read? 0_0
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zomgmad Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist
twilight you dumb-butt your horn is missing too
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HeimoBauss Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Her special talent is being nothing therefore her cutiemark is an oddly shaped white spot which just happens to be the exact same white her coat is.

And no, it does not glow in dark. But throwing some radioactive waste on it might help...
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g-master-artist Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that sounds legit :XD:
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HeimoBauss Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
New headcanon lets go!
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g-master-artist Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
alright!!
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vindurza Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:baffled:  i am completely lost
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Xenonic64 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I thought her name was Swerti Bal
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The-Rarispy Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What tools did you use to do the shading on this? It looks incredible.
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sugarshiibe Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what episode/clip is this from? i haven't watched the show in a while.
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xArakayx Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh mY GOD
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dmtactical Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I cried tears of laughter.
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KopaLeo Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see...

This entire thread is a satire of "General Abstract Nonsense", aka Category Theory Art Criticism!
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caballero-nocturno Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
lol lol
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Airship-King Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Pffff!
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ThatGuyOnTheInterweb Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconlolwutplz:
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frong Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
HARP DARP.  :icongarfield-derpplz:
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Kyoshyu Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Au naturel, btw. ;p
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