You have a very plastic composition. Those frames are simply very well composed, both characters and backgrounds. I like some of background action, like with Lyra and Bon-Bon (though it wasn't fully showed what was going on), and Pinkie asking for cookies prints. I really don't get what's going on with multi-coloured linearts (sometimes black, sometimes darker or lighter basic color, sometimes mixed with one which is under it), but I guess this is something related to style of yours, like black eyes. I really wish there was somethinf neat on that scrap of paper from fortune cookie (like some famous quote or smart joke), though then would be no further action, but I guess one could think something out, even for slice-of-life themed comic. Overall - interesting simplicity and composition.